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Raj Menon's avatar

Nicely modernized.

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Jayshree Gururaj's avatar

Thanks Raj, appreciate it!

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Keith Wood's avatar

Powerful stuff Jayshree, loved getting to know a bit of your culture, very different to mine but enlightening.

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Jayshree Gururaj's avatar

Thanks, Keith, glad you liked it. The ancient stories are in a league of their own, too!

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C.L. Steiner's avatar

I knew this story was familiar! Beautifully done!

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Jayshree Gururaj's avatar

Thank you, I tried a different take and am happy to hear your feedback.

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mark's avatar

Hey, you might like Clay Burrell's Unchained English Teacher on Substack...

Please keep sharing the ancient stories! Thank you.

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Jayshree Gururaj's avatar

I will check it out, Mark. Thanks for the motivation!

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Richbee's avatar

Krishna consciousness

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Richbee's avatar

Om nama shivaya

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